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Post by Roxy on Oct 21, 2004 22:54:38 GMT 11
Yay Guess what everyone i got 20/25 on my english short story!!! the teacher said i know how to capture my reader. hooo hooo hooo PaRtY!!!! hands tim tams out
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Post by Arien on Oct 21, 2004 22:57:54 GMT 11
HUZZAH!!!! ;D Congratulations Roxy! what was your story about?
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Post by Roxy on Oct 21, 2004 23:02:20 GMT 11
lol its a bit of a soapie But anyway it was about a girl an and her parents were in a car accident and her father was killed instantly then her mother was in hospital and because this girl had no other family in that town she called her sister for some reason she had never met because her sister was around 15 years older than her and moved away when she was born. Anyway in the end her mother dies and after the funeral she comes accross an envelope addressed to her from her mother and she finds out that her sister is her biological mother. and the mother that died was the grandmother. does that make sense ?
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Post by Roxy on Oct 21, 2004 23:03:50 GMT 11
sorry my colours went crazy. Thanks i was quite proud with the mark.
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Post by Roxy on Oct 21, 2004 23:09:17 GMT 11
um.. well i don't know how well i told it. I wrote the story in the view of the girl so i guess it might have more effect in that way. I think i might see if i can post it on the writers board.
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Post by Monster on Oct 21, 2004 23:13:32 GMT 11
sounds like a very cool story
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Post by Monster on Oct 21, 2004 23:14:07 GMT 11
i'm guessing 20/25 is good
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Post by Roxy on Oct 21, 2004 23:15:41 GMT 11
i think its a high b low a
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Post by Roxy on Oct 21, 2004 23:16:39 GMT 11
ok well i just put it on the writersmerge board
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Post by Roxy on Oct 21, 2004 23:17:35 GMT 11
well i didn't think it was that great to be honest
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Post by Monster on Oct 21, 2004 23:20:40 GMT 11
i'll read it when i have time
sounds good though
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Post by Roxy on Oct 21, 2004 23:22:51 GMT 11
lol i like your name omegadefender it is interesting
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Post by Monster on Oct 21, 2004 23:24:56 GMT 11
Thanks roxy
so is your name roxy or is there a different reason you chose your name
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Post by Dameon on Oct 21, 2004 23:26:17 GMT 11
Congrats Roxy!!!
I'll read it when I'm not watching TV, but good work!!!
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Post by Roxy on Oct 21, 2004 23:28:37 GMT 11
thanks kayt! ooh tv i vaguely remember that. well my name is roxanne but i don't like my name so my friends call me roxy so i am boring and just wrote that in.
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Post by Roxy on Oct 21, 2004 23:32:15 GMT 11
well anyway i have to go or i will never get up in the morning. Cya everyone. (feel free to send me a msg and tell me my story is crap lol  ;D  |
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Post by Miska on Oct 22, 2004 18:01:57 GMT 11
congrats roxy! im gonna head over there now and have a read! 20/25 is a brilliant mark! wooooot to u!
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Post by Roxy on Oct 22, 2004 19:43:49 GMT 11
lol thanks miska! offers another tim tam. yay i actually have a real packet now.
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Post by Miska on Oct 22, 2004 20:53:16 GMT 11
ooo woot! go the timtma!
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Post by Roxy on Oct 22, 2004 21:10:56 GMT 11
:'(i'm so ashamed they are almost gone! HELP i'm addicted to tim tams
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Post by Miska on Oct 22, 2004 21:13:10 GMT 11
awww *quickly get the fire service nad special health clinic oh standby* jsut incase....*trys to give mint slices as suppliment*
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ROXY
SNOOPY!!!!
Need I say more?
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